Blog 3/7

Our writing consultation yesterday went very well. We knew there were some problems with chronology and fluidity and Vincenza was very helpful. For a rough draft, I'm pretty impressed with our progress on this project. I don't think I've ever had a paper as nearly complete as this one is so far in advance. Of course there is still a lot of work to be done. We haven't interviewed our retiree and we're still a ways away from formulating a coherent conclusion that incorporates all the information of our paper. To be honest, I don't plan on thinking about it over spring break but when class starts again we'll definitely begin working on those things in particular.