Friday, April 11, 2008

Blog 4/11

We didn't make it to the fire station this week and so our paper is only moderately different from the last draft. But modifications to the introduction and conclusion have definitely made it stronger. Now there is a clear purpose and direction to the report. Instead of just a list of events and dates it's now more of a call to involvement and awareness. The test today was pretty manageable. Starting with the last question and working your way backwards is a much better approach. I wish I had added more details regarding the souther manifesto though. I couldn't remember the supposed author's name.

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