Sunday, November 23, 2008
Revisions to Second Draft
I plan to do a comprehensive proof reading of my graded second draft and plan to revise the ending quite a bit. The conclusion I have made based on the time period in which Hamilton Holt made his decision is probably going to remain but I hope to add a bit more clarity and purpose in the body portion of the paper to augment the endings impact. Furthermore the correction and of many formatting issues and the addition of more cited sources is on my list to create the final draft.