Rough Draft

I thought that the sharing of each topic on Friday was quite intriguing and I was surprised that there was such a wide range of topics. I'm pleased with how my rough draft ended up and I look forward to getting it back and further working on it. Although most of my research was included in my paper, there was a small, select amount that I decided to not include since I wanted to wait to see how it would fit into the paper in later drafts. Hopefully, with the revision of the rough draft, I will be able to incorporate the other research.