Rough Draft

I spent most of this week trying to figure out what I need to do to fix my rough draft. I am trying to find some more information to make my paper stronger. I am having a tough time however taking out information. I feel as though my points are strong. I just want to make my paper thicker. This requires me to go back through my sources and look for information that I did not put into my original rough draft. I feel like I will have a much better second rough draft. I will also see what information Dr. Chambliss has for me and see what he wants me to improve on. After all those corrections I will feel very confident in my second rough draft.