Sunday, November 16, 2008

Rough Draft 2

Some altercations that I made to my rough draft is I tried to develop a theme. I decided to write about how the theaters are just more than theaters to the people in the community. They mean so much more to some people. This helped me make it longer because my paper was on the short side. I am still unsatisfied with the length of my paper, but hopefully by the time I have to hand in the final draft it will be adequate. I also fixed the obvious grammatical errors and made I improved my transitions from paragraph to paragraph. Hopefully Dr. Chambliss will have more advice for me to get my paper better.

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