Sunday, November 16, 2008

1947 H.C Second Draft

For my second rough Draft of the Historic Winter Park Project, I added some images which I hope will make it a bit more interesting. Furthermore, I cited more of my sources using footnotes and updated the bibliography. I drew a conclusion at the end of my paper which took into consideration the racial tension that existed in the south during the 1940s and I attempted to show both sides of the issue fairly. My goal was to not only question Holt's motives, but moreover to see his side of the issue, I'm not entirely sure if i was able to accomplish this as of yet, but hopefully I will by the final draft.

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